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There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family.What are the advantage and disadvantages of having a small family rather than a large family?

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A growing number of nuclear family has been a trend over the extended family on the earth. While having a small family would certainly have more advantages of
education
 for children, there will be
also
 existed a drawback on for woman role. One evident benefit to having an elementary family is that it would create more opportunities for children to receive the best educational background.
In other words
, from parents’ experience, they would concentrate to observe and apply the most suitable method in
education
 for the development of kids including training logical thinking and soft skills in reality.
For example
, a large family has to pay for various expenditures
such
 as households, transportation, food which means there will be less spending on a specific requirement, including
education
. As a consequence, children could not have the chance to gain a profound knowledge and improve social skills.
On the other hand
, the obvious disadvantage to have a conjugal family require more responsibilities from parents, especially woman role.
Instead
 of a family with different generations to share household chores, a family having parents and their children expects wife who performs multi-role to take care the foundation need of a family.
For instance
, beside a 9-to-5 job in the workplace, a mother need to be a cook, babysitters as well as breadwinner to look after the whole family
that is
such
 a burden,
moreover
, minimize time for her nurture. In conclusion,
education
 is a plus point to having a small family, helping better on intellectual and physical skills, whereas a married woman need to be a multi-Tasker in caring family’s members to ensure for living standard fullness.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Demographic trends
  • Family planning
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Birth rate
  • Population growth
  • Child-rearing
  • Single-child policy
  • Work-life balance
  • Sustainable living
  • Intergenerational support
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