In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge

In the modern world,

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technology has been revolutionised. Many advances have been made in the field of agriculture,

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however

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the

availability

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of food is still not a hundred

percent

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per cent

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and

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, a lot of people still go hungry. The main causes of the

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problem are as follows. In

this

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world,

money

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is needed to buy the basic necessities of life. Nothing is available free of cost. To earn

money

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,

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people need proper education and a stable job. The population of the world is increasing

day-by-day

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day by day

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.

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overcrowding, lack of proper education, unavailability of stable jobs and less number of

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skilled training institutes are posing a great danger to the finances of a variety of countries, for, example Africa and some Asian countries. A lot of other issues, like unequal distribution of

money

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,

money

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laundering and black

money

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etc are letting the rich increasing their assets each day, and

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, suppressing the poorer to the extent that they are left hungry by the end of the day. Certain steps can be taken to control these problems.

Firstly

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, the

government

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should implement strict strategies regarding

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availability

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of free secondary education, so that, if the people are non-affording,

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they

that

can still have a chance to live an independent life.

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, training skill programmes should be organised by the

government

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in order to train the youth in various skills, and

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, make them a constructive asset for the country.

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,

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ones who are affording and have completed their

bachelors

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degree,

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of well

payed

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jobs must be ensured by the

government

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. These jobs must be

merit based

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and the eligibility criteria must be crystal clear, in order to minimise the chance of wrong selections and bribery.

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, awareness programmes for the public should be conducted regarding population control on

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social media platforms to control overpopulation. In conclusion, to fulfil the basic needs of life,

money

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is important. The

government

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should ensure the

availability

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of enough resources for the public

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so that they can choose a career to raise the standard of their living and to decrease the dependency level.