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Since environmental problems are so serious in many countries, the only possible way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

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Dear Dev, I am writing
this
 letter to inform you about my new residential address which is near to your house. My name is Hardeep Singh and
last
 week , I moved from my previous location which was at central pathway building
number
 786. As you know , that area was not suitable for me because of too much traffic congestion and there is no transport service available for local people. Fortunately, I get a new house near to your current address which is full of all amenities like bus service , markets and playgrounds. My present address is
next
 to Circle Garden Center in building
number
 420 and my flat
number
 is 840.
Moreover
 ,
this
 is a two-bedroom apartment with attached washrooms and a large kitchen area.
Although
 ,
this
 apartment is cheaper than the other ones building management provides a myriad of facilities like free access to a gym and swimming pool.
Finally
, I am very curious to show you our new house and I will be over the moon if you will come
this
 weekend with all your family members. You can leave me a message with a suitable time and day on my cell phone
number
 which is 648273737. I am waiting for your response. Best regards, Hardeep Singh
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