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implementation, I assisted clients with the migration of their ERP Systems from SAP ECC to S4 HANA and have also enabled them

#implementation #clients #migration #erp #systems #ecc #hana
This
 letter is to express my interest in your esteemed organization for the role of an experienced, result-oriented & highly organized Business Analyst. With a bachelor’s degree in Mechanical Engineering, MBA in Operations & IT and with 7 years of
experience
 across Chemical, FMCG, Hi-Tech, Manufacturing and Oil & Gas Industries, I have a stellar record of helping high-profile clients with ERP implementation and Supply Chain Digital Transformation. I, now, have the
experience
, skills, and a result-driven attitude to succeed in
this
 role at your organization. For the
last
 7 years, I have been part of Supply Chain Digital Transformation Projects along with SAP S4 HANA up-gradation projects. Through client engagements, detailed requirement gathering, and successful ERP implementation, I assisted clients with the migration of their ERP Systems from SAP ECC to S4 HANA and have
also
 enabled them to transform their Inventory Management Processes with the help of technologies including Data Science, Artificial Intelligence. In the short span of my career, I’ve tried to learn and develop my acumen towards Supply Chain Business Processes and the Agile framework for project management for each company I’ve worked for. I value my role in an organization and aspire to help teams through my knowledge and
experience
. I’ve attached a copy of my resume that details my
experience
. I can be reached anytime via my cell phone, +91 9711605816, or via email at [email protected]. Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to discussing
with
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