Many people believe that current system of both teachers and students in the class room will no longer exist by the year 2050. To what extent do you agree with this oponion?

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A group of people assume that the teaching and learning process in the class will disappear in

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2050.

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. It is absolutely possible that advanced technology will change the teaching and learning

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teacher

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in delivering their material.

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the internet which are used by

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teachers

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in teaching like

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and classroom

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. These applications help

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to teach without going to

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class

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at schools or universities, and there will be many variations

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which is invented that change

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method

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currently

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. It is

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possible that there will be no changes in

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many years later. The reason is that teachers play important roles

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students

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emotional

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aspect.

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and elementary school need to be

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emotionally and they will acquire

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and

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related to their feeling and mental health.

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side. All in all, I personally

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believe that there will be more supporting technology

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that

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some changes in

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sector.

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any significant impact

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learning

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process because teachers

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in the class, like kindergarten and primary

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Fully explain your ideas

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If countries are serious about solving traffic problems, they should tax private cars very heavily and use the money to provide free or very cheap rail travel To what extent do you agree or disagree?