Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.

There is an ever-increasing use of
machinery
,
such
as tablets and laptops, in the classroom. It is often argued that
this
is a positive development, whilst others disagree and think it will lead to adverse ramifications.
This
essay agrees that an increase in
machinery
is beneficial to
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and teachers. It is clear that the internet has provided
pupil
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with access to more information than ever before.
Moreover
, learners have the ability to research and learn about any subject at the touch of a button. It is
therefore
agreed that
machinery
is a very worthwhile tool for education. Wikipedia is a prime example, where
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graduate
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can simply type in any keyword and gain access to in-depth knowledge quickly and easily.
However
, many disagree and feel that
machinery
deprives people of real human interaction. Human cooperation teaches crowd valuable skills
such
as discourse, debate and empathy. Despite
this
, human synergy is still possible through the internet and
this
essay disagrees automation should be dismissed for
this
reason.
For instance
, Skype and Facebook make it possible for
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to interact in ways that were never before possible. In conclusion, while the benefits of technology, particularly the internet, allow
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scholar
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to tap into limitless sources of information, some still feel that society should be wary of
this
new phenomenon and not allow it to curb face to face communication.
However
, as long as we are careful to keep in mind the importance of human cooperation in education, the educational benefits are clearly positive.
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