When cars and cyclists use the same roads, there are often problems. Why is this the case? What are the solutions?
At the start of the year, there is an abnormally high rate of
cyclists
during the weekend based on the trending charts in Singapore. However
, it is confirmed in the news that cyclists
are obstructing the roads in Singapore due to the increasingly large participation of events over the months. Moreover
, it is a fact that cyclists
on road
generally might cause more problems to car users
that widely depends on the number of users
in bicycle models and lack of awareness in road
pavement. However
, certain bicycle models such
as mountain bicycles are not optimised for roads such
as in rainy weather because their tyre is not robust and will be costly for maintenance and repair over the months. Hence
, a large number of cyclists
on the road
pavement are focusing their attention on what lies ahead of them and taking instructions from their front-line leaders, so it will be difficult for them to navigate their surroundings with mindfulness. As for the solutions, I will recommend a smaller group of cyclists
with a mirror attached to the side and back of their bicycle and a model that is
optimised for roadway such
as pavement bicycles tyre that is
durable for rainy and hot seasons. Another problem could be that cyclists
are lacking hand gestures to indicate car drivers
on the lane when they are making a turn on congested roads. Hence
, this
could mislead drivers
and cause more accidents in the future. As for car users
on the road
, they are less likely to cause major problems unless there is an indication of mental disability such
as obsessive-compulsive disorder or anxiety issues for drivers
themselves. In conclusion, cyclists
must have the right equipment, models and knowledge on the road
to ensure zero accidents. As for the drivers
, ensure that they are in the right condition of mental state for them to be driving safely on the road
without endangering the lives of other users
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite