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The pictures below show three different kinds of bridges.

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The given images illustrate three distinct types of overpasses, namely arch, concrete girder and suspension. Looking from an
overall
 perspective,
although
 all bridges
built
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 with the aim of helping people go through an extensive area of water, their locations and lengths are different. With regard to the first pictures, the arch platform was constructed above a lake, at a maximum of 200 feet long.
Additionally
, in order to have enough space for a small ship, its height is 100 meters from the lake’s bed to the bridge. In terms of the concrete girder, located at a river, its structure is special since there are many piers, which are no more than 200m side by side, built to keep the bridge’s surface balance. The number of piers decides how long the bridge is.
Besides
, it is up to 300 meters tall, which is suitable for a medium boat to cross. Looking at the
last
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 suspension bridge, which is situated at the sea. There are two main piers with a distance of 400 to 2000 meters and a large ship can pass through because of the countless height.
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