You have recently applied for a course at a college and have been accepted. However, you cannot join the course due to some reasons. Write a letter to the principal of the college. In your letter: which course you have been applied for why you cannot join the course ask about the possibility of the course in the future Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter regarding the joining of my
college
. I am Madhuri completed my 12th standard and applied to your
college
for
(B.Sc
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a (B.Sc
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) 3-year Degree
course
. Yesterday I received the email that I got selected and can join the
college
from August 12th 2019.
However
, I apologize for the response that I can not join the
college
due to certain reasons. I saw the
college
booklet
in
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your university website and the fees structure, accommodation, food etc.
Although
I live opposite side of the
college
I was very much interested to join, but I see there’s no
college
bus available for my route.
Also
, there is no public transport available from where I come from. So, I decided to join another
college
, which is convenient to me, but the
course
I wanted to take is not
in
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an
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option and all seats are booked for
this
year.
Although
I don’t have that
course
I am inclined to go with B.Com 3-year degree
course
as I am
also
interested in computers, which has better scope in near future. I would appreciate
if
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it if
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you can tell me about the
course
I left and the possibility of the
course
in future so that digests myself and
to
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prepare for my career options. Thank you for your patience. Yours faithfully,
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