Personal experiences in leadership roles, facilitating changes, and mentoring others.

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Born and raised in a family of educators, the spirit of teaching runs in my blood.

This

spirit is reflected in my

experiences

during my undergraduate studies in the Department of

Oceanography

at Bandung Institute of Technology (ITB), Indonesia, as a teaching

assistant

for

courses

such

as OS2102 Fluids Mechanics, OS3105

Ocean

Tides, OS3106

Ocean

Current Circulation, OS3004

Ocean

Remote Sensing, OS3001 Environmental

Oceanography

, and OS3203 Hydro-oceanographic Survey. I actively contributed to the academic success of the

students

I mentored by fostering a positive learning environment through personalized guidance and hands-on

experiences

such

as analyzing

oceanography

data using MATLAB, Python, and other related software. A quotation from Richard P. Feynman, “If you want to master something, teach it,” made me realize that my teaching assistantship experience

also

taught me profound lessons. Being an

assistant

in introductory theoretical

courses

such

as OS2102 Fluids Mechanics, strengthened my mathematical and physical understanding of fluids mechanics theory and equations. The more applicative

courses

such

as OS3105

Ocean

Tides, OS3106

Ocean

Current Circulation, and OS3004

Ocean

Remote Sensing, not only equipped me with essential oceanographic knowledge but

also

enhanced my programming skills,

for example

, calculating the Ekman transport, the tidal harmonic analysis, and satellite data processing in MATLAB and Python.

Furthermore

, the OS3001 Environmental

Oceanography

and OS3203 Hydro-oceanographic Survey

courses

assistantship provide me with practical skills in using

ocean

and atmosphere observation tools,

such

as Water Quality Checker (WQC), Acoustic Doppler Current Profiler (ADCP), Conductivity Temperature Depth (CTD), and Automatic Weather Station (AWS),

as well as

managerial skills in conducting a field survey.

Furthermore

, I am

also

trusted as a teaching

assistant

coordinator, explicitly focusing on OS3106

Ocean

Current Circulation and OS3004

Ocean

Remote Sensing

courses

. My dual role as a teaching

assistant

and

assistant

coordinator allowed me to take on a broader leadership role. As the

assistant

coordinator, I am responsible for orchestrating the course structure and content, designing a curriculum that

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academic standards and

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the state-of-the-art in

oceanography

, and managing the other teaching assistants. Balancing assisting the

students

and coordinating specialized

courses

equipped me with a holistic understanding of academic administration. These

experiences

have

also

cultivated a multifaceted skill set I am eager to bring into my future

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. In my professional career as a researcher at the BRIN Indonesia, my responsibilities extended beyond the

research

work in the office. I took on the crucial role of mentoring

research

interns and undergraduate

students

as their co-supervisor, guiding them through the intricacies of

research

methodologies and cutting-edge data processing and analysis for their

research

projects. Through constructive feedback and encouragement, I aimed to create an environment that nurtured creativity and critical thinking.

Together with

my mentees, I have proudly produced two Python-based applications and over a dozen

research

manuscripts in the publication process during my mentorships. Apart from that, I am

also

proud to have assisted over eight

students

from various Indonesian national universities under my co-supervision to pursue their bachelor’s degrees in marine sciences. After all, my engagement in mentorship

experiences

and leadership roles have been integral to my personal and professional development. These

experiences

allowed me to witness firsthand the transformative effect of guidance and support on the professional growth of young researchers. Moving forward, I am committed to leveraging these

experiences

to continue fostering positive change and mentorship in whatever professional path I pursue, contributing to the growth and success of young scientists in Indonesia.

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Personal experiences in leadership roles, facilitating changes, and mentoring others.

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