The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The three diagrams show how Queen Mary Hospital developed from 1960 to 2000. In 1960, Queen Mary
Hospitals
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Hospital
show examples
consisted of four main buildings. The hospital and The Shopping
Centre
were located on the main road,
while
Farmland and Car Park were located
on
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at
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the backside. In 1980, The Shopping
Centre
was replaced by two buildings. The Hospital building was enlarged and a Pharmacy was built in the same building. The Cancer
Centre
was built
next
to The pharmacy. The Farmland was replaced by a Nursing School. In 2000, Queen Mary Hospital had the same buildings as it did in 1980. The Cancer
Centre
was extended south and took some
area
from The Nursing School. The Nursing School
area
became smaller in 2000 than it was in 1980. The Car Park
area
also
became smaller in 2000 than it was in 1980. The changes in the
area
were in
favor
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favour
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of the Cancer
Centre
, which was enlarged dramatically.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words centre, area with synonyms.
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