The charts below show what UK graduate and post graduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
The bar graph illustrates the profession of UK
graduate
and post
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postgraduate
graduate
students who did not undergo full-time employment during their post college
period in the year 2008.
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post-college
Overall
, studying further
was most popular among UK graduates
as well as
postgraduates
. In contrast
, engaging in volunteer work
was the field least chosen among both the
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graduates
. Moreover
, in total, the number of graduates
was almost 10 times more than the number of postgraduates
.
A staggering 29,665 graduate
students opted for further
studies, whereas
a meagre 3500 graduate
students wanted to do voluntary work
. Furthermore
, the amount
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number
graduates
doing part-time work
or unemployed remained almost the same at 17,735 and 16.325 respectively.
In addition
, only 2725 postgraduates
enrolled in further
studies, which is nearly 11 times less than the graduates
proportion. Change to a genitive case
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noteworthy is the fact that a similar trend was seen in all the other fields as well as
only 2,535, 345, and 1625 postgraduates
engaged in part-time work
, voluntary work
and unemployment respectively.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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