Climate change is an issue. Do you agree with that?

I want to talk about the
competition
I attended when I was in high school. It was a
competition
about literature. I was nominated by my literature teacher because I was good at it. At the beginning of the
competition
, I felt stressful because a number of people were watching us, included my literature teacher, and I didn't want my teacher to feel disappointed. At
first
, questions were easy, but they were getting harder, but
subsequently
I was able to complete the
competition
with a success. I came
first
in the
competition
within a hair's breadth. Some students are easy to lose interest, and a
competition
is a good mean to draw students' attention to the subject. Yes, if good students are rewarded, they are less likely to lose motivation, and they can keep studying at the same level. I would say that
competition
among students and especially among parents is now fiercer than it was once. Now, parents want their children to be almost perfect academically, and they push them hard, so that the
competition
is harder now. I think by doing intensive training a sport
person
can improve him/herself rapidly.
On the other hand
, pushing a body hard in a short period of time can cause physical injuries, body harm. I think it depends on one's character. If one is motivated while in a
competition
, I would say that
competition
is a positive for
this
person
, but if the opposite is true for another
person
, I wouldn't say that
competition
could help that
person
. I think it is possible to become too competitive in a sport because a very good result is essential for some sport people, and they are likely to do whatever necessary to reach the result they are asking for.

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