The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of major university in 2012.
The bar graph indicates how many people were part of the academic staff in the faculties of a major university in 2012, with a
further
classification by gender. As illustrated by the graph, the percentage of male academic staff members was significantly higher in faculties that deal with science and engineering compared with the percentage of female colleagues.Submitted by marikaki.per on
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