Use the information and language from this lesson to answer this Writing Part 1 task. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below gives information about how people aged 25-34 are housed in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart provided information about the percentage of people aged 25-34
either
Correct pronoun usage
who either
own
or Wrong verb form
owned
rent
a house in the UK between 2004 and 2014.
Wrong verb form
rented
Overall
, home owners
experienced a downward trend Correct your spelling
homeowners
while
renters showed an upward trend through
the period. Change preposition
throughout
Although
renters initially
had a lower rate, they outraced homeowners at the end
of the period.
Percentage
of Correct article usage
The percentage
home owners
was about 58% in 2004, Correct your spelling
homeowners
being
higher than Unnecessary verb
apply
Correct article usage
the renters’s
renters’s
rate by approximately 30%. Remove the s
renters’
Then
it went down slightly to about 56% in 2006 and went up to 57% in 2007. Next
, the figure showed a dramatical
decrease to almost 52% in the year 2011 and remained virtually unchanged in 2012. Replace the word
dramatic
Then
it continued to decline steadily to about 36% at the end
of the period.
The number of people renting was about 20% in the year 2004 and increased to about 33% in 2005 and remained consistent in 2006. However
, the figure experienced a
significant Correct article usage
apply
a
steady growth during the Correct article usage
apply
next
5 years, reaching around 41% in 2011. It remained stable in 2012 and continued to rocket to 47% in the year 2014, outraced
the rate of Wrong verb form
outracing
home owners
.Correct your spelling
homeowners
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end, next".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 6 times.
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