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Write a letter to a television company congratulating them on tv program that you have recently seen. Write a letter to the television company. In your letter -Mention when and why you watched it -Say why you liked it so much -What effect it might have on other people.

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I am writing to congratulate the respected authorities, after being enthralled by a television
programme
; Easy Yoga, which has been recently started by your company. Personally, I have liked it so much. Actually, I was suffering from
the
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back pain and I had consulted all the doctors but, unfortunately, all my efforts had gone
into
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 vain. But,
last
 week when I saw an advertisement
of
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 your TV
programme
; Easy Yoga, I could not resist
myself
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from
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watching
ir
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it
. Within seven days, my back pain has just miraculously vanished. The most impressive thing about
this
programme
 is, the lucidly explaining technique of every yoga posture and
also
 the timings of
this
programme
is
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 seven in the morning which is suitable for everyone. For every age group person, be it a child or an adult,
this
 show has something lucrative to learn. Feeling very happy
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 your show, I have no reluctance to say that,
this
programme
 has proved that it is the health which is the real wealth. Once again deepest congratulations.
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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