You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • say why he/she would not enjoy going to college • explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her • suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her Write at least 150 words.
Are we happy?
Everyone tries to be happy, without worries about the job, the
money
or the future in general. Unfortunately
just a few Add a comma
,Unfortunately
people
, or nobody, reach the
real happiness.
According to an online questionnaire, most Correct article usage
apply
people
crack up thinking about money
, realizing it is never enough for all we need. Younger people
, 16 to 25 years old, didn't get a stable job, or they are Correct your spelling
underpaid
under paid
, working many hours per day. Correct your spelling
underpaid
Elderly
are bonded to the pastCorrect article usage
The elderly
,
when Remove the comma
apply
people
needed to save money
to survive. They are unable to spend money
when is not strictly necessary, cutting down even the electricity if they have financial worries.
In my experience, I'm almost 30 years old, and I feel anxious about the future. I have to improve on my job, taking exams to get a fixed position; I have to buy a house and I'm thinking about a family, hence
I must worry about money
.
The workplace plays an important role in reaching happiness. The questionnaire shows that secretaries live some enjoyable moment
at work, laughing and chatting every day. Contrarily taxi drivers are much more unsatisfied Fix the agreement mistake
moments
about
their workplace.Change preposition
with
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The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.
