The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, many countries in

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world era in a race to achieve their aim with science. The key to many problems humans face is science to reduce hunger,

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new cures and create a better economy. There is a

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that

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priority and the essential goal of

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should make humans live better. In

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essay

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i

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will examine why

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agree with

this

statment

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statement

.

To begin

with, the

scientist

's development benefits the

people

's

live

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. Many invented cures and discoveries of technology bring

people

to a new era.

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years ago, someone who

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infected by the flu clse to

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because of the lack of cures and no knowledge about them.

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,

scientist

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invented Antibiotics that make us adapt

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the flu.

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,

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make us safe.

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, there are many countries

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in Africa and Asia suffer from

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invalid lands for agriculture but scientists took their science and knowledge advantages to help poor lands to make them valid.

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, there are many

people

and lands that benefit from the invention of the

scientist

and change their

live

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. In conclusion,

people

should be aware

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the benefits that

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made

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and be

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with

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.

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scientist

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the world will end.