Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
At present, even though businesses have many competitors, an array of masses believe that marketing via ads can
make
people Verb problem
encourage
encouraged
to purchase items, Verb problem
apply
hence
it is doing well for them while
another part of the society argues that due to
generalization
of Correct article usage
the generalization
adverstising
, it does not catch the eyes to get things. Correct your spelling
advertising
However
, I strongly opine, making
ads and promoting can Correct word choice
that making
make
entrepreneurs on top of Verb problem
put
sky
because individuals easily get attracted, so it is examined in Add an article
the sky
this
essay.
To commence with, there are specialized groups of qualified proffesionals
who are hired by companies to prepare Correct your spelling
professionals
attarctive
strategies through posters, banners, television commercials, etc in order to motivate society to purchase their products. Correct your spelling
attractive
For instance
, if a television commercial broadcasts
on a popular channel in a peak hour, Wrong verb form
is broadcast
so that
it would make more audience Correct word choice
apply
to
buy it. Fix the infinitive
apply
Moreover
, with the technology development, most of
clothing stores Change preposition
apply
has
made their marketing by posting attractive photoshoots on social media.
Correct subject-verb agreement
have
In contrast
, even though
with the presence of a lot of Correct word choice
apply
advertisments
for Correct your spelling
advertisements
peoples
vision, the most Change noun form
people's
eye catching
posts always inspire viewers to buy them. Add a hyphen
eye-catching
For example
, when scrolling downwards on Facebook, many sponsored advertisments
Correct your spelling
advertisements
advertisement
appears
, but whenever there is an attractive commercial, we Correct subject-verb agreement
appear
Change the verb form
tend
tends
click and get information Add the particle
tends to
of
the item and Change preposition
about
then
most probably it is then
bought. Additionally
, humans have natural insticts
to try things which are visually more appealing, so better visualizing commercials always grab the interest of the community to get those items. Correct your spelling
instincts
Therefore
, in spite of the huge number of promotions available, still companies make money by catching peoples
instincts.
In summary, even though there are loads of industries today Change noun form
people's
whom
Correct pronoun usage
that
marketing
their products by impressing common Wrong verb form
market
persons
, still they can achieve their targets because of technical developments. Having said that, I strongly believe, people are still interested Replace the word
people
of
buying their needs which they see Change preposition
in
by
promotions, Change preposition
through
ultimately
it provides Rephrase
apply
flush
of success to entrepreneurs.Add an article
a flush
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task response
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