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You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter • give details of your course • explain why you need a week off • say what you want the Principal to do.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I recently join
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 networking post-graduate diploma in your college and it is a two-year course. But, I want to request you that I want to take off in the coming month for one whole week. Actually, I am suffering from
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 pain
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from
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 few days and
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 the ending days of the current month, the class teacher announced the date of
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 tests. So, I decided to take off in the starting week of the incoming month. So, it will not affect my studies and I will bring notes from one of my classmates. kindly grant me leave for seven days. So, I can take proper treatment for my back pain and get back to studies with full energy and good health. I hope that you will understand my situation.I am waiting for your permission. Thank you
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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