Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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performance is becoming polarized between groups of mental power supporters and physical health favours. In

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essay. I will discuss both views and

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give my conclusion. On behalf of people placing “strong and fit” on top, there is no

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about the role of having a good

body

shape and perfect

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condition.

First

, a fit

body

with high-quality

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index is key to achieve auspicious outcomes,

otherwise

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it would be very challenging for players to have impressive success in

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rofessional

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world.

For example

, Olympian swimmers require large shoulder, long arms to facilitate the catch and pull motion that save time and energy, and usually are 6 feet tall; the basketball players need strong legs to have forceful score jumps.

This

physical strength helps sportsmen utilize

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most of their ability,

also

gain an edge over their rivals. For another instance, at the same weight, a boxer with muscular arms is often more competent and

therefore

can easily beat up his enemy whose muscle weight does not meet up healthy standards.

On the other hand

, those valuing mental

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have their own reasons.

First

of all, it’s the determination that moulds people to hard work that gains physical strength. It’s

also

the determination that

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people

practicing

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continuously till their skills are accomplished.

Moreover

,

sport

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world is not a bed of roses, it has ups and downs, mental power is what gives people resilience to stand up from failure, to keep heading forward, to reach the unreachable results.

For example

, Lionel

Messie

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Messi

still is one of the greatest

footballer

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thanks to his relentless efforts despite having deficient height. In conclusion, I believe that while stay strong and fit is necessary, mental power is

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sufficient condition for success in

sport

. One should stay in the best condition physically and mentally to achieve the goal that’s wanted.