In the past, most people worked for small businesses, while more people now work for large businesses. What are the advantages and disadvantages of working for large businesses?
Due to
advances in technology and the job market, many people who Linking Words
worked
in small companies nowadays work for large ones. Certainly, there are positive and negative points in both places. Wrong verb form
work
This
essay will discuss what are the advantages and disadvantages of working for a huge business.
On the one hand, working for a huge company can be a great experience once workers have more opportunities and better conditions of job that lead to a satisfactory salary. These benefits can motivate individuals to choose Linking Words
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kind of site rather than small companies. Linking Words
For instance
, working for a large and well-known company sited in big metropolitans, the worker has more chance to choose where city he wants to live. Linking Words
In other words
, the person has more opportunity to know other cities, and cultures and Linking Words
this
way to improve his networking.
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But
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On
on the other hand
, having a job in a huge company can lead to competition among workers in order to promote an uncontrolled rance for being promoted and Linking Words
also
a life without work-life balance owing to excess of activities. Linking Words
For example
, the worker always needs to find out ways to stand out Linking Words
of
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from
crowd
. Correct article usage
the crowd
In addition
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competition among people is unhealthy, damaging their mental health. The more individuals Linking Words
are thinking
only about occupation, money, and promotion, the more mental and physical disorders they will have. Damaging mental health is not worth it.
In conclusion, there are a plethora of pros and cons to working for large companies. People need to make decisions balancing both sides. Wrong verb form
think
This
essay argued about the upsides and downsides of one kind of business.Linking Words
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Conclusion
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Cohesion
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