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Your neighbour keeps making noise and having late night parties though you have talked to him several times about that. write a letter of complaint to the chairman of residental committee and suggest what should be done

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Dear Mr. Brown, I am writing to complain about the terrible noise every
midnight
 during
this
 week, coming from my neighbour who just moved in
last
 week in room 1004B.
Firstly
, courageous politely tried to convince him
quiet
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 down at late
midnight
 since the soundproofing system of the apartment is not in standard condition and
l
 can hear all the noise from his house, which made me feel utterly uncomfortable.
However
, he just ignored my complaint and went on
keeping
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 his television sound and music out loud.
Furthermore
, it
turns
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 me to be
extreme fatigue
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, when he holds
the
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an
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 all-
midnight
 party with his friends. His noise has affected my regular activities as
l
 need the
quite
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quiet
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 at
midnight
 to concentrate on my study and complete all the tasks.
Consequently
,
l
 can hardly do anything and accomplish the best result in learning.
Moreover
,
l
also
 suffer from insomnia and
l
 need
entirely
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 peaceful space to fall asleep.
However
, it is crucial for me to get enough rest, which
make
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 me always in an exhausted condition. Might
l
 suggest that, as the chairman of
residential
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 committee, it would be advisable for you to impose some strong solution
such
 as administrative sanctions. At the same time,
l
 would suggest you speak to all the residents
try
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and try
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 to keep quiet especially at late
midnight
 to avoid affecting other’s space, health and other activities. I hope that you give
this
 matter your urgent attention.
This
 would help our apartment maintain
its’s
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 civilized reputation. I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Furthermore
, gallant hope you will take my comment into consideration. Yours sincerely, Hoang Vi Huong
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task response
Address the specific noise issues and their impact
coherence cohesion
Use appropriate greeting and closing for a formal letter
lexical resource
Improve the variety and accuracy of vocabulary
grammatical range
Use more complex sentence structures and improve the accuracy of grammar

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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