Your neighbour keeps making noise and having late night parties though you have talked to him several times about that. write a letter of complaint to the chairman of residental committee and suggest what should be done

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Dear Mr. Brown, I am writing to complain about the terrible noise every

midnight

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during

this

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week, coming from my neighbour who just moved in

last

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week in room 1004B.

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, courageous politely tried to convince him

quiet

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to quiet

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down at late

midnight

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since the soundproofing system of the apartment is not in standard condition and

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can hear all the noise from his house, which made me feel utterly uncomfortable.

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, he just ignored my complaint and went on

keeping

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to keep

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his television sound and music out loud.

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, it

turns

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causes

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me to be

extreme fatigue

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extremely fatigued

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, when he holds

the

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all-

midnight

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party with his friends. His noise has affected my regular activities as

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need the

quite

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quiet

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midnight

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to concentrate on my study and complete all the tasks.

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can hardly do anything and accomplish the best result in learning.

Moreover

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also

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suffer from insomnia and

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need

entirely

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an entirely

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peaceful space to fall asleep.

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, it is crucial for me to get enough rest, which

make

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makes

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me always in an exhausted condition. Might

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suggest that, as the chairman of

residential

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the residential

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committee, it would be advisable for you to impose some strong solution

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as administrative sanctions. At the same time,

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would suggest you speak to all the residents

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and try

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to keep quiet especially at late

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to avoid affecting other’s space, health and other activities. I hope that you give

this

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matter your urgent attention.

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would help our apartment maintain

its’s

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its

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civilized reputation. I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.

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, gallant hope you will take my comment into consideration. Yours sincerely, Hoang Vi Huong

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task response

Address the specific noise issues and their impact

coherence cohesion

Use appropriate greeting and closing for a formal letter

lexical resource

Improve the variety and accuracy of vocabulary

grammatical range

Use more complex sentence structures and improve the accuracy of grammar

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

274 words

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Your neighbour keeps making noise and having late night parties though you have talked to him several times about that. write a letter of complaint to the chairman of residental committee and suggest what should be done

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Today more and more people want things instantly (e.g goods, service, news) Why is this? Is it positve or negative development?

Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What effects will this have on society?

some people believe that professionals, such as doctor and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In most successful organizations, some people believe that communications between managers and workers is important, other people said that other factors are more important. What is your opinion?

Health services are the basic necessity for a person. Private companies have make the health services quite costly for ordinary individuals. Do the advantages of private health care outweigh its disadvantages？

Health services are the basic necessity for a person. Private companies have make the health services quite costly for ordinary individuals.   Do the advantages of private health care outweigh its disadvantages？