The article is about the life story of a common man who became a successful entrepreneur. I am very glad to know about his achievement in the business and he always have the vision.

Dear Sir, I would like to introduce myself, I am Sundar Raj from Chennai, Tamil Nadu. I am writing
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Ravi Jadhav with whom I have lost my contact. I found an article about him published in your newspaper dated 01.10.2020. The article is about the life story of a common man who became a successful entrepreneur. I am very glad to know about his achievement in the business and he always
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the vision. He inspired me with his various
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ideas, since our childhood. It is very unfortunate, we lost contact
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after I moved to Mumbai with my parents for business purposes. Kindly Provide the contact details or residence address, which would help us to get reunited. Please mention my name as Chittu from Chennai for easy recognition.
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