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you saw an advert in the newspaper asking for volunteers to help run a charity program. why you are interested in helping give details suitable past experience suggest ways you might help with the event

#advert #newspaper #volunteers #charity #program #event
Dear Sir, I am writing in response to your advertisement
on
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 the local newspaper for volunteers to continue an aid program. I am keen to work
for
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this
. I would like to involve myself in
such
 work for some reasons.
Firstly
, the aim of the project is to help the poor people by providing food and winter garments for 3 months;
therefore
, being part of
this
 will give me a sense of satisfaction. Another prime cause is achieving some practical competencies by working directly in the field, which will add value
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 my career prospects. Mention able that, I already have experienced in part-time working with an NGO in
simillar
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similar
 project, where I was responsible to visit task implemented places and collect data. I believe I would be proved valuable for your program if you select me as a volunteer as I already acquainted with
such
 tasks. I can help you with informing field information
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time to time and counting how many poor have been benefited through the work. I am requesting you to select me as a volunteer of
this
 program by considering my background and, provide me
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the opportunity to serve helpless and enrich my resume. Yours sincerely, Taslima
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