Money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. Governments could better spend this money on other things to benefit the nation. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Space

exploration

offers a great deal of information about the universe.

However

, the amount of

money

spent on these projects,

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can be invested by the government for

further

beneficial uses for society, which I actually support, but we can search for other ways to fund the

exploration

force. Nowadays, to construct a project of

space

exploration

, a number of equipment and supplies are needed to cover the needs of the project, which in the end costs a huge amount of

money

.

However

, the benefit behind the expedition is remarkable, and since there are advancements in technology and science every day, there are many problems in life that need to be considered.

For example

,

people

struggle with health, education, security, and food supplies every day, so it could be better if the

money

is invested to help

people

.

On the other hand

, there is much to be learned from the

exploration

of

space

as we can discover new materials and new energy resources;

moreover

,

this

can afford jobs for

people

who are interested in

space

. Because we cannot deny the importance of

space

exploration

, governments should stand together

while

exploring and

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all research together

instead

of forming separate companies and duplicating funds. We can sum up the ideas by saying that study and research to discover

space

are quite essential to our lives. But if these projects overconsume

money

, we shall use it

instead

for more beneficial projects needed for the citizens because it will be immoral to neglect

people

's problems for some

exploration

.