IELTS Writing Samples Band 3

In modern times, Sahara desert and the Antarctic have been visited by many tourists even when conditions are difficult, as will now be discussed.Many tourists get to explore places, when they go to the antarctic or sahara desert as they get to see many animals like the camel, snakes, bears and many more.The beautiful scenerys gives the feeling of heaven, which makes tourist astonished. Tourists also get the opportunity to meet different kinds of people from different cultures and countrys. They have different activities like skiing and bungee jumping in the antartic, as well as desert safari's in the sahara dessert. Mainly it helps tourist to disconnect from their difficult city lives and enjoy nature in the best way possible....
It has become apparent in recent time that more and more different people are eating fast food. However, doctors and scientists say about the dangers of fast food. There is no doubt that fast food is bad for health of people. In this essay I am going to analyses the subject prior to making a conclusion....
Nowadays, young people have tendency to have connection with others online rather than to communicate with individuals directly in real world....
Nowadays, with the expansion of communication, a large amount of advertisements, specially for children. It is suggested that advertisements which target at children should be prohibited because of their negative effects. In my opinion, although advertisements can trigger negative influences, I believe it should not be banned....
In recent times, people say that pictures are more effective than words on T.V. and in newspaper for news stories, as will now be discussed....
Government supporting arts such as music and cinemasfinancially more than other public services provided in the nation. However, some believethat investment in the entertainment industry is less important than public service.Therefore, it is agreed that authorities must use these funds to consolidatelocal services instead. The need for improvements such as medical and education facilitiesyet to be advanced will prove this. Firstly, no doubt the government has achieved significantimprovement in the medical field if we compare it with the last decade. But still, someinfrastructures have not been improved at the expected level, for instance, severalcities are still lack hospitals, dispensaries, and ambulances for localswhere financial support more crucial than recreational activities. Thus, localauthorities should raise their awareness in advancing these facilities thanwasting money on arts that people even do not need them. Secondly, some part having luxury education support whilepoorer province doesn’t. Education needs to reach every corner of the city soevery student can acquire one. For example, the government should establish moreschools and provide all the basic requirements, so instead of only focusing ongrowing cinemas, they should develop more tuition centers. In summary, the entertainment industry would not bring anybenefits to those who are suffering due to under-developed facilities in theirlocal areas and if children would not get access to proper education they willfor sure face unemployment which will directly impact on county economy.Although music and cinemas can also be a part of the government’s investment, they should put their higher priorities on local services....
The given line diagram illustrates and compares the figure for enquiries received by the ‘Tourist Information Office’ in a city from January to June in 2011....
It is true that nowadays people tend to traveling to overseas. There are various negative effects that these countries have to face, but I believe this movement is worth and the positive will be outstanding....
Reading for pleasure helps to improve their imagination and ingests better command on language. Whereas, Watching television equally develops language skills but in a different way....
Although I am a MA student in European Studies, I worked as a foreign trade specialist in a logistics company for about two years before starting my master's degree....
It is true that foreign films are more popular in many countries than domestically produced films. There are several reasons why this is the case and I believe that the governments should promote local film-making by subsidising this industry....
Education does not only mean getting knowledge from books and subjects, but it helps a student to learn from his peers and teachers. Education plays a vital role in everyone's life and it offers numerous perks to an individual....