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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important Environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #time #loss #species #plants #animals
The pie chart and the table illustrate the
energy
 consumption proportions by different applications and electricity
units
(kWh) used classified by the number of members in the residence respectively in Australia. Overall, heating and cooling, and water heating contribute more than
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half of the entire
energy
 usage of a typical
house
. On average, more than 5000
units
 were used at a minimum by any household and it is observed that usage increased when the number of occupants in the
house
 increases. Heating and cooling is the largest portion of the
energy
 consumed in a
house
 with
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38% while water heating came
second
 with a one quarter from the total.
However
, fridges and freezers, and lighting were contributed with the same amount of 7% each, while cooking and stand by power recorded 4% and 3% respectively. All other applications like clothes and
dish washers
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, entertainment and small appliances covered about 16%. A strong positive correlation was
showed
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 in the
energy
units
 consumed
respective
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 to the number of
people
 in the
house
. Typically, 5000 to 6500
units
 were consumed per year where only a single occupant was
precent
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present
per cent
 while 6000 to 8500
units
 were used when two
people
 lived in the
house
. If three
people
 were in the
house
, it was recorded to use about 7500 to 10000
units
 per year.
However
, as expected with
this
 trend, 12000 to 16000
units
 were used on average if more than five
people
 were living in the
house
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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