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Reading books keeps a person’s mind active, whereas watching films and television is passive and does not require a person to use their imagination. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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person attention and makes it more active or smart. Entertainment purposes are rather relaxing, but at the same time entertaining. we will have a brief look at both of these topics ahead. Reading is common practice among today generation even though it required a lot of effort. for a different type of education qualification, whether related to science or mathematics, those had a crucial role to offer. When research and development had modified various things in life. For ,instance one needs to specialise in a certain course, to qualify for a medical professional, because they required active thought and the ability to act quickly in an emergency situation. Entertainment was important in people's lives but to get rid of anxiety and boredom. Sometimes watching documentary could be a better option provided that are based on real stories. Since the modern ,era people have less time to watch movies and television, because of tight working schedules. A balanced approach is required to keep the ability of the mind in check, through different types of reading and watching habits. It is concluded that disagreement is inevitable in the present scenario, because of the fact both practices required the use of judgment at different levels. in fact, no conflict is allowed especially in those provided use of television and movies were wise enough.
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