Some people think that offenders should be put in prison. Others, however, believe that providing offenders with education and training is more effective than putting them in prison. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are valid arguments about how to deal with
criminals
. Some people say that they should be imprisoned,
while
others think rehabilitation programmes are an efficient solution. I will discuss both views in
this
essay. On the one hand, it is essential to imprison
criminals
in order to uphold the rights of the victims and to ensure that those responsible for the
crimes
are held accountable.
This
is especially important when it comes to felonies,
such
as murder, rape, or robbery, which have profoundly negative impacts on both the victims and society as a whole.
Furthermore
, to curb the crime rate,
crimes
should be strictly punished by
prison
sentences to set examples for others if they intend to commit a crime.
For example
, there are many public trials to show how
criminals
are punished by imprisonment.
On the other hand
, rehabilitation is another solution for those
criminals
who commit less serious
crimes
. Let's take shoplifting
crimes
as an example. Judges should consider the motivation of
crimes
, which in
this
example may stem from unemployment. In that case, judges can give offenders vocational training in
prison
so that after the end of their
prison
term they may find a job for their living.
In addition
, young offenders have a long future ahead of them, so they should be given a different trial compared to adults’ trials in which education and training may be prioritised, ranging from reform schools to counselling juvenile delinquency programmes.
As a result
, they can integrate into the community again and become responsible members of it. In conclusion,
prison
sentences are a crucial way to maintain social order and security.
However
, I think to address the problem of the reintegration of
criminals
into society after serving
prison
sentences, rehabilitation programmes should be given to them associated with detention.
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