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As a result of tourism and the increasing number of people travelling, there is a growing demand for more flights. What problems does this have on the environment? What measures could be taken to solve the problems?

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Both graphs illustrate the
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admission
admissions
 of overseas
students
 and local ones in
Australian
universities
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year
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 of overseas
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Australian
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 2001 till
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 2010.
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, in 2001 intended to registrate at the
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 institutes 20 000
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overseas
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, which was accepted just half of them. The number of
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overseas
students
 kept on choosing the
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universities
, and the
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percentage
 of
acceptance
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in other
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 was
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admitted
 50
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 of
students
.
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 higher number of overseas
students
 was observed in 2010 with over 80 000, more with 40 000
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science
 2001. The
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acceptance
 a the same, being accepted in 2010 just 40 000 of
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overseas
students
.
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graph
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 enrolment in the
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universities
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number
November
. The information was
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research
researched
 during a period over 10 years. In accordance with the
graph
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students
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 more than
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overseas
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the year
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 2001 and the higher point is in
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2007 with 60 000
students
, which is constant during 3 years after. The
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percentage
 of
acceptance
 is higher than
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overseas
students
. In conclusion, the
procentage
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percentage
 of
acceptance
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students
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number
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