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Some people believe that personal happiness is directly related to economic success, Others believe that there are other factors. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is often held that
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 some demographics of society claim that economic success plays a central role in gladness whilst
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 think that alternative factors could be effective
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this
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This
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. On the one hand, the role of money for being happy is indispensable. To illustrate, by
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 of money everything would be achievable in today's world.
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, individuals could access
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whatever they want, leading to
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 of delighting.
For instance
, people who have prosperous careers are considered as good fortune due to the fact that they could be satisfied by their profession , leading to
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 of cheerfulness.
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 that the more worthy general populations, the more glad life.
On the other hand
, there is no denying the fact that
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 could be effective in form of happiness.
That is
 to say, being happy refers to psychology category which
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 in our emotion. In effect,
this
 innate feeling would not be attainable by money owing to the fact that it is associated with satisfaction
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 life.
For example
, maybe a pauper person is more
delight
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 than a wealthy individual because of
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 busy. On the whole, the opinion that
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 brings about sheer euphoria could be wrong. To conclude, there is a controversial discussion about which is directly connected with cheerfulness;
However
, I personally believe that satisfactory life and economic success are equally important to create an environment full of pleasure.
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