Some people say History is one of most important school subjects other people think that, in today world, subject like science and technology are more important than History

Few people argue that nowadays

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school.others have

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that

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science

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most important

subject

to learn rather than other the

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my position both the sides of

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opinion

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regarding

history

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.

This

subject

should be main.Why the students should focus on

this

subject

because through

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know importance of culture. To explain it today pupils have mot much interest in the

history

think it is boring as well as they

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get knowledge about the cultures and the traditions through

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internet can get knowledge but they are lost in western culture by the internet and social media.only

history

subject

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therefore

it should be

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in school.

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,

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generation

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not know how our

worriors

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warriors

had

leading

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and sacrificed their

life

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for the independence of India. regarding

this

can know

value

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the value

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of the warriors.

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, it should be important for students as well as teachers. Discussing

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another reason is , the

science

and

technology

are more important because recent time everyone depends on

technology

and they cannot imagine

life

without it. To explain it, without

science

subject

cannot get higher salary jobs in future. As well as in every field

technology

becomes a part of

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life

.

Also

without

technology

may be

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teachers are unable to learn. Nowadays, the

projecter

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projector

and online classes are leading following to

science

, the job interviewers hire employees regarding

science

and maths marking not like

history

and others.

For instance

, the survey revealed that in 2020, 80% top salary workers had topped in

science

in their school time.

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we cannot ignore the profits of

science

and

technology

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lives

life

lifes

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. To conclude

it

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, it is true that

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science

and

technology

is

main

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part of

life

and without it impossible to survive. But

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believe that

history

be

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compelsery

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compulsory

and priority. Because it is

only

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way to teach

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generation the value of customs and worriers.