Write a letter to a local restaurant that is very noisy. In your letter Introduce yourself Describe the problem Say what actions you will take

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Dear Manager, I am writing a grievance letter about noise problem from your restaurant. I am Ayesha

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near your restaurant. For the

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couple of days, I have been hearing a loud noise of music from your cafe which I cannot take a rest and sleep well.

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, my health is getting adversely affected by indisposition as I am working the day shift in the hospital and by all means I do not want to get impacted on my health and work.

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, I would like to request you to please follow up on the timelines of the playing music loud or else you could down the volume of the music. It would be great if your management took care of it. I want you to maintain the decorum of society and would appreciate it if you solve

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issue is well being

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I'll have to register a complaint for unethical behaviour at the nearby police station. I am looking forward to hearing a positive response from you. Yours Sincerely,

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coherence cohesion

Maintain a clear paragraph structure, each with a single focus. Ensure there is a logical progression from introducing the problem to suggesting solutions and possible actions.

coherence cohesion

Use appropriate salutations and sign-offs in formal letters. Be consistent in the level of formality throughout your letter.

task achievement

Fully address all parts of the task, including describing the problem in detail, stating who you are, and outlining clear actions you will take. Make sure your response is complete.

task achievement

Adopt a tone that is polite and formal, while also being assertive about the issue at hand to effectively convey your concerns without sounding confrontational or casual.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

172 words

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Write a letter to a local restaurant that is very noisy. In your letter Introduce yourself Describe the problem Say what actions you will take

Some people think that enjoying the present is more important than planning for the future for both countries and individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?

Some people believe that children's leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.

Some people believe that the best way to control accidents on city streets is to lower the speed limit but others think there are more important issues that need attention before roads can be safe. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

'Prevention is better than cure''. Researching and treating disease is too costly so it would be better to invets in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree