Write a letter to a local restaurant that is very noisy. In your letter Introduce yourself Describe the problem Say what actions you will take

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Dear Manager, I am writing a grievance letter about noise problem from your restaurant. I am Ayesha

residing

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and I reside

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near your restaurant. For the

last

couple of days, I have been hearing a loud noise of music from your cafe which I cannot take a rest and sleep well.

However

, my health is getting adversely affected by indisposition as I am working the day shift in the hospital and by all means I do not want to get impacted on my health and work.

Hence

, I would like to request you to please follow up on the timelines of the playing music loud or else you could down the volume of the music. It would be great if your management took care of it. I want you to maintain the decorum of society and would appreciate it if you solve

this

issue is well being

otherwise

I'll have to register a complaint for unethical behaviour at the nearby police station. I am looking forward to hearing a positive response from you. Yours Sincerely,

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coherence cohesion

Maintain a clear paragraph structure, each with a single focus. Ensure there is a logical progression from introducing the problem to suggesting solutions and possible actions.

coherence cohesion

Use appropriate salutations and sign-offs in formal letters. Be consistent in the level of formality throughout your letter.

task achievement

Fully address all parts of the task, including describing the problem in detail, stating who you are, and outlining clear actions you will take. Make sure your response is complete.

task achievement

Adopt a tone that is polite and formal, while also being assertive about the issue at hand to effectively convey your concerns without sounding confrontational or casual.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

172 words

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