People are surrounded by advertising, which has an increasing effect on our lives. Do you think the positive effects of this outweigh the negative effects.
In
this
contemporary era, advertisement, whether it is goods or services, is growing by leaps and bounds. The public could see this
everywhere, which highly affects the way to live. From my perspective, The merits of this
situation surpass the demerits and my inclination is discussed in the further
essay.
To begin
with, some industries use this
approach as a trick to attract people to purchase things and for that use variety
of ideas. Correct article usage
a variety
For instance
, collaboration with famous actors and actresses, exclusive deals, sales and many more things. Individuals sometimes buy things, which are not needed, because of the temptation of special offers besides
this
some of them see celebrities as their role model
and seeing them Fix the agreement mistake
models
advertising
a particular product Wrong verb form
advertise
make
them want to have it without noticing the fact that Change the verb form
makes
does
the product worth their money or not.
Unnecessary verb
apply
On the other hand
, advantages of the advertising cannot be avoided and the first reason is that this
awareness of social issues such
as health care, childhood obesity, gender inequality and many more problems could be spread to the
folks. Correct article usage
apply
For example
, well-known people do advertise about this
, who are famous and respected in society, because
of Correct word choice
and because
this
people listen to them and took
Wrong verb form
take
a
Correct article usage
apply
step
to solve Fix the agreement mistake
steps
this
difficulty. Moreover
, everyone could easily know about the latest products no matter where they live. A number of villagers may be unaware of certain goods because it is maybe not available near their accommodation. However
, they could acknowledge this
due to
ads.
To conclude
, even though there are a plethora of drawbacks to this
, the positive effects outweigh the negative effects, which do not only help to solve social issues but are also
a leisure way to get familiar with new products.Submitted by Shivuhirpara08 on
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Task Response
Ensure that your introduction clearly states your opinion on the topic. Provide a clear thesis statement in the introduction that outlines your position on whether the positive effects of advertising outweigh the negative effects.
Coherence and Cohesion
Your essay demonstrates good coherence and cohesion, with logical progression of ideas. However, consider using more linking words and phrases to establish clearer relationships between sentences and paragraphs.