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Advantages and disadvantages of travelling with a group.

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Travelling is a necessity for some and
leasure
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leisure
pleasure
 for others. Some like to go to new places alone, others prefer a company. Some of the advantages of travelling in a group are safety and companionship, while there are a few
disadvantages
 as well like conflict in opinion and physical
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strength
. Though
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 there are some
disadvantages
, it can be said that overall advantages outweigh the
disadvantages
. On one hand, couple of
disadvantages
 which are faced in a group trip are issues relating to
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 in thinking among the members,
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 places to visit, food, timings etc.
Also
, every individual has
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 own level of physical boundaries example sleep timings, walking
lenght
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length
, to name a few. It can be difficult to enjoy on the trip in case of clashes in understanding among members. Whereas,
on the other hand
, there are many positives to travelling to a new place with a known person. New territories bring unknown risks and security concerns which become less scary if one has a company of a partner.
Moreover
, it is always good to have a companion on
such
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endeavours
. Having a loving company can transform the trip into a memorable experience. In conclusion, discovering a new location with a team member has its
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fare
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 share of advantages,
such
 as safety and support, and
disadvantages
,
such
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 in likes and body's capabilities.
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