Some people agree with spending lots of money on a large wedding, while others think a small wedding is a better option. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Many
people
Use synonyms
thinks
that Change the verb form
think
wedding
is Correct article usage
a wedding
one
Correct determiner usage
a
time
moment, some Correct your spelling
one-time
people
agree to Use synonyms
held
Change the form of the verb
hold
large
and expensive wedding Correct article usage
a large
while
others Linking Words
thinks
it is better to have Change the verb form
think
simple
ceremony. I will discuss both views and give my own perspective.
On the one hand, some Add an article
a simple
people
want to make their wedding become Use synonyms
Correct article usage
an unforgetable
unforgetable
moment with Correct your spelling
unforgettable
Correct article usage
a numbers
numbers
of invitations and Fix the agreement mistake
number
spectular
attractions. Family Correct your spelling
spectacular
traditions
can be referred Use synonyms
for
Change preposition
to as
this
phenomenon as in some cultures it is a symbol of Linking Words
happines
and Correct your spelling
happiness
feeling
of Correct article usage
a feeling
grateful
to Replace the word
gratitude
the
God. Correct article usage
apply
For example
, Batak ethnicity in Indonesia Linking Words
required
Wrong verb form
requires
for
Change preposition
apply
the
new couples to Correct article usage
apply
held
Wrong verb form
hold
big
Add an article
a big
party
for seven nights. In their culture, it Fix the agreement mistake
parties
is shows
the economic status in their community because of the Change the verb form
shows
mount
of Correct your spelling
amount
money
spent for that Use synonyms
occasions
. Fix the agreement mistake
occasion
Linking Words
This
Correct determiner usage
These
traditions
sometimes make Use synonyms
people
delay the decision to married as they need to prepare for the wedding cost.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, others Linking Words
thinks
that saving Change the verb form
think
the
Correct article usage
apply
money
for future needs Use synonyms
it
is more important than Correct pronoun usage
apply
spent
Change the form of the verb
spending
the
Correct article usage
apply
money
Use synonyms
at
one night. Young couples with low economic income are considering more on their life after marriage. Change preposition
in
This
Linking Words
is now become
a trend in young generations for celebrating their wedding moment only in Change to the active voice
now becomes
has now become
Religion
office, Correct article usage
the Religion
place
where married process Add an article
a place
the place
documented
. Add a missing verb
is documented
For instance
, several months ago I saw Linking Words
trend
in Social media when Add an article
a trend
the trend
people
post a picture of their simple wedding and give testimonials of their life. Most of them are happy with their decision and highlighted that they can save more Use synonyms
money
for Use synonyms
another needs
Replace the adjective
another need
other needs
such
as house rental and insurance.
In Linking Words
conclusions
, Fix the agreement mistake
conclusion
while
some Linking Words
people
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required
to Add a missing verb
are required
spent
Change the form of the verb
spend
money
on expensive and large Use synonyms
wedding
because of Fix the agreement mistake
weddings
traditions
, others have Use synonyms
decide
to save the Change the verb form
decided
money
for the household budget after Use synonyms
married
. Replace the word
marriage
However
, I believe preserving Linking Words
traditions
is a must but couples should Use synonyms
also
consider their economic level before deciding the scale of the wedding. In my opinion, it is better to save some Linking Words
money
for the future with a simple wedding ceremony.Use synonyms
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