Studies show that many criminals have a low level of education. For this reason, some people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate people in prison so they could get a good job once they are released.

In

this

contemporary epoch, schools should be considerably raised the amount of time on several kinds of indoor and outdoor

sports

as well as

exercise

to minimise the overweight

problem

of

children

. In my perspective, there are numerous other ways to solve

this

problem

which are

also

effective. In

this

essay, I will elaborate on my visions in the forthcoming paragraphs with effective examples.

To begin

with, schools and other educational institutions should be increased the amount of time on different kinds of physical practice for the purpose of solving the overweight difficult of

children

.

Moreover

, It has several merits not only reducing the excess weight

problem

but

also

keeping their body fit and healthy.

Sports

and

exercise

are crucial for everyone they remove our monotonous and

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us so much pleasure.

For instance

, when the school play an important role in physical

exercise

for their pupils which

also

be a habit in their future.

In addition

to

this

,

students

also

keep their attention on studying and they feel come back to their school.

In addition

to

this

, educational institutions arrange regular

sports

competitions among

students

which

also

encourage them in

sports

.

On the other hand

,

there

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a numerous other

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ways

waysay

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ways

to tackle

this

problem

such

as

eat

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hygiene food along with

maintain

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proper rules in daily

life

which is

also

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beneficial

beneficialal

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beneficial

for pupils. Every

students

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should eat healthy food and make

it

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practices

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in their

life

.

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,

students

also

follow

proper

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life style

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for

examles

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, maintain sleeping like going to bed early and

wake

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up early

at

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the morning. To cite an example, when a student

maintain

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hygience

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hygiene

hygienic

food in their

life

and follow regular health

exercise

such

as running on

treadmill

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which

also

reduce

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their overweight and keeps their body fit and healthy. There

are

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also

various

others practice

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that

also

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effective in

children

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life

.

Children

go to

nearby

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field

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with their siblings and friends for playing

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different

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differents

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sport

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like soccer,cricket,

bedminton

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badminton

and so on which

also

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effective to solve their overweight problems along with

build

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their leadership

quality

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, disciple,

time

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management skills. In a nutshell, to recapitulate the aforementioned arguments into deep consideration,

i

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would like to restate that school solve

overweight

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the overweight

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problem

of

children

by taking

obove

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above

steps and

this

is

best

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way to solve

this

problem

. There are

also

several

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effective

effectives

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effective

way

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ways

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which

also

beneficial for

students