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SUMMARIZE THE INFORMATION BY SELECTING AND REPORTING THE MAIN FEATURES AND MAKE COMPARISONS WHERE RELEVANT

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GRAPHICS IN
THIS
 TEST SHOW THE TOP TEN COUNTRIES WITH THE HIGHEST
SPENDING
 ON TRAVEL IN 2014. THE EXPENDITURE IS SHOWED BASED ON THE CALCULATION OF US $
BILLION
. COUNTRIES
THIS
 COUNTRY CONTAINS TO CHINA, UNITED STATES, GERMANY, UNITED KINGDOM, SINGAPORE, SOUTH KOREA, HONG KONG, INDIA, MALAYSIA,
TAIWAN
.
THIS
 GRAPH IS USING A MULTIPLE OF 20 SCALES WHICH STARTS FROM 0 TO 120. THE GRAPH IS SHOWED WITH A HORIZONTAL DISPLAY WHICH IS ACCOMPANIED WITH THE SEPARATOR LINE IN THE SCALE WITH VALUE 4. COUNTRIES WITH THE HIGHEST
CONSUMER
SPENDING
 ON TRAVEL FALL IN CHINA COUNTRIES WITH
SPENDING
 110 US $
BILLION
.
FURTHER
 RATING ACCORDING TO THE FOLLOWING UNITED STATES AND GERMANY WITH 85 US $
BILLION
, THERE ARE UNITED KINGDOM WITH 55 US $
BILLION
, SOUTH KOREA AND HONG KONG WITH 20 US $
BILLION
, INDIA WITH 15 US $
BILLION
, MALAYSIA WITH 12 US $
BILLION
 AND 12 US $
BILLION
 WITH THE US $ 12
LAST
 RATING IS
TAIWAN
 WITH 10 US $
BILLION
. COMPARISON OF
SPENDING
CONSUMER
 ON TRAVEL CHINA WITH
TAIWAN
 CONTAINED 100 US $
BILLION
.
CONSUMER
SPENDING
 ON CHINA IS LARGER 11 TIMES LARGER THAN
TAIWAN
. THERE ARE 2 STATE COUNTRIES THAT HAVE THE EQUATION OF
SPENDING
 CONSUMERS. COUNTRIES IN ASIA CONTINUE TO DOMINATE
SPENDING
 CONSUMERS COMPARED TO OTHER continents. THE CHINA COUNTRY BECOME A
SPENDING
CONSUMER
 IN 2014. CHINA NEIGHBOR COUNTRIES, HONG KONG AND CHINA ARE
ALSO
 INCLUDED IN
THIS
 LIST.
THIS
 IS RELATED TO MANY NUMBER OF POPULATIONS WHERE THERE ARE POTENTIALS FOR VERY BIG TRAVELS.

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