■The chart below give information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. ■Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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This

chart illustrates the

percentage

of

british

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people

giving

money

to

charity

at various

age

range for the

years

1990 and 2010. The ages were divided into 5

groups

; 18-25

yrs

. old, 26-35

yrs

. old, 36-50

yrs

. old, 51-65

yrs

. old, and the >65

yrs

. old

age

groups

. ●

At

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the

year

1990, the graph shows the top

age

groups

who are able to donate

money

to

charity

were the

people

at

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the

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age

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36-50 and the lowest are the

age

group

of 18-25

yrs

old. The 36-50

yrs

. old

age

group

are usually the ones who are already into investment and are

commonly

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with

stable

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job, 40% of them gave

money

to

charity

. Meanwhile, the

group

with

least

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amount of donations are the ones at around 18-25

yrs

. old. Most of the time

this

group

is still at

college

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level or entry level at work, with

minimal

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amount to donate. 15% of

this

age

group

donated to

charity

.

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35% of the British

people

at

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age

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of

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51-65

years

old were generous enough to help for a cause.

While

30% of the 26-35

yrs

. old & >65

yrs

. old (Middle

group

) equally provided

on

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the same

year

. ●

However

by the

year

2010, you can see

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drastic change in

percentage

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of

donors

for the

charity

and

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improvements

on

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the

age

groups

as well. In

this

bar graph, you can see that the hard earners and near to retire

age

group

of 51-65

yrs

. old, from 35%., 40% of them donated

money

to

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charity

placing them as one of our

high paying

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donors

. The

age

group

of 18-25 still remained as the least

donors

at only 5% of their population donated

this

year

. The

Second

and

equally

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group

of

donors

were the

age

group

of 36-50 & >65

years

of

age

at the

percentage

of

thirty five

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. The

third

group

, at the

percentage

of 25 are the 26-35

yrs

. old. ●The generosity of the British

people

may vary with their

age

and career in life.

This

bar graph only shows the

year

1990 & 2010. To sum it up, I can conclude that the

age

group

36-50

yrs

. old who

were

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the highest

percentage

of

donors

at

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the

year

1990 still continued to prosper and donate

at

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charity

by the time they reach 51-65

years

old at the

year

2010. The

age

group

of 18-25

yrs

. old may

remained

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as the least

percentage

of

donors

but we can't deduct their contribution to the

charity

throughout the

years

.