The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2012.

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information about the

percentage

of the academic staff in faculties, of a major university by gender, in 2012.

Overall

,

female

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experienced a downward trend,

while

male

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showed an upward trend throughout the period. Both

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percentage

rates had fluctuations.

Although

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initially

had a lower

percentage

rate

, it attracted female's

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at the end

of the period.

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staff

percentage

rate

was about 56% in arts, being higher than the male's

percentage

rate

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rate

by approximately 12%.

Then

it decreased to almost 35% in business. After that, it showed an incremental of about 75% in education

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and continued to decline in engineering, reaching around 15%.

However

, the figure experienced a steady increase during the

next

two

faculty

. It increases to 40% in law and 52% in medicine.

At the end

of the period, it again experienced a decrease of about 36%, being lower than the male's

percentage

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percentage

of academic staff members across the faculties was less than 50% in arts, and it increased in business

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65%. In the education

faculty

, it experienced a high decline of about 25%,

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lower than the female's

percentage

rate

of approximately 50%,

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to increase in engineering by around 85%, being higher than

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any other

faculty

.

However

, the figure experienced a steady decline during the

next

two

faculty

. It decreases to 60% in law,

then

decreased by around 48% in medicine and it continued to increase in science

faculty

by around 64%, outracing the

rate

of

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.