Mordern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge. To what extent is this a positive or a negative development?

It is certain, that
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contemporary
technology has made it easier to download
music
and scripts from
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internet
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without any cost. I agree with the fact, that it will benefit many people who cannot afford to buy
such
exquisite items. But
on the other hand
, it will
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the
book
publication companies and
music
studio companies with heavy losses.
This
essay will discuss both the positive and negative aspects of
this
current trend.
Firstly
,
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discuss the positive aspects of
this
trend. The younger generation has benefited
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the
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prerogative
to download their
favorite
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music
and books
with
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no
charges
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. There are many
music
lover's
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, who listen to
music
very often, to heal their minds and I don't see anything wrong with it. College Students can now download their curriculum
book
at no cost.
This
will enable them to save their money and read anything that they would like to with no extra charges. Certain
book
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books
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that are very heavy can now be replaced with
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online versions.
This
will enable us to carry it in a portable device without any effort.
For instance
, Britannica which
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extremly
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extremely
heavy and hard to purchase, can be easily downloaded over
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internet
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.
However
, there is a negative aspect with
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to
this
issue. The main reason
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that writers , singers and
music
producers will face a tremendous loss.
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of many
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writers
and singers
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dependent on the sales of their work. If
this
trend continues many people will
loose
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their jobs.
For Instance
, I had a family member, who has
the
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passion
to write
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for writing
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novel's
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. She recently launched her
book
in
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amazon
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. As soon as her
book
hit the market , someone released the pirated version of her
book
in
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on
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internet
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.
This
is hampered her earnings to a great
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. If we don't safeguard their rights , we may end up
lossing
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losing
some of the biggest talents and one day they may
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disappear
. In a nutshell, I would like
to conclude
by stating that modern technology has definitely helped the
middle class
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and lower
middle class
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middle-class
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family
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families
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to afford some great
music
and books at zero price. But,
this
will impact the publication houses and
music
industries. The reason being that
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their survival is dependent on the sales of their books and
music
respectively.
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