The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The pie chart illustrates the proportion of

tourists

who visited four different destinations in the United Kingdom, in the year 1999. The tabular chart gives

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breakdown of the tourist's preference for the common spots within the

theme

park. The data has been calibrated in percentages.

Overall

,

theme

parks

and museums/ galleries remained the most frequently visited sites by

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tourists

.

Whereas

, in

theme

park

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the most conspicuous and favoured site for touring remained the Blackpool pleasure beach. We can make out that almost

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third

of the visitors resorted to

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to

theme

parks

(38%) and

museum

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and galleries (37%) only. Amongst the rest of the

tourists

, the historic houses and monuments were more famous to pay a visit to I.e. 16%.

In contrast

, only 9%

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were interested in seeing the wildlife,

parks

and zoos. The Blackpool pleasure beach was the most commonly visited place in

theme

parks

and as many as half of the visitors coming to the

theme

park, visited it. Around one-

third

of the

tourists

visited the Alton towers and

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land, Southport.

Lastly

, around 10% of visitors liked to go to the Legoland and Chessington adventure lands each.