Some people say that it is individual responsibility to protect the environment while others say it is the government's primary role. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are various
irreversable
incapable of being reversed
irreversible
threats to our eco-system.
Safe-guarding
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Safeguarding
our
environment
has become a major concern. It is highly debatable, as to whose responsibility it is? Many people believe that it is an
individuals
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individual
responsibilty
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
,
on the other hand
, others feel it should be only the
government
's concern. To embark on, Every citizen needs to ensure that they are very cautious in protecting the
evironment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
as
the the
definite article
the
government
cannot monitor everyone. Citizens play a vital role in protecting the
environment
by reproducing,
resusing
use again after processing
reusing
and restoring the resources..
For example
, researcher have proved that
use
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the use
of plastic bags
are
Suggestion
is
a threat to the
envirnment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
.
In addition
to that, a recent survey, has proved that many vendors are selling their goods in paper bags.
Furthermore
, many entrepreneurs, have started recycling the used
papers
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paper
into paper bags and reselling them.
This
contribution by the people of the country can have beneficial impacts on the country in the near future.
On the other hand
,
government
needs to equally contribute towards the protection of the
environment
. As protecting the
environment
may require the
government
to devise a few new
regulatations
an authoritative rule
regulations
and monitor them closely.
For instance
, the
indian
a member of the race of people living in America when Europeans arrived
Indian
government
, has started the movement '
swach
to so extreme a degree
such
swatch
bharath
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Bharath
'.
However
,
intially
at the beginning
initially
the results were fruitful as they were serious consequences for littering the vicinity. But with time, the
government
has become too lenient with the people who are violating the act, resulting into
clutttered
filled or scattered with a disorderly accumulation of objects or rubbish
cluttered
surrounding
the environmental condition
surroundings
.
Hence
,
government
plays a crucial role in maintaining the
environment
. In my opinion,
government
does play a primary role in protecting the
environment but
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environment, but
the contribution of the individuals is equally important
.
Accept space
.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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