Some systems require students to speacialize in a limited range of subjects from the age of fifteen. Other systems require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school? What are the benefits of two education systems and what is better ?
Nowadays, students often have to decide whether to generalise or to specialise their study. While studying a myriad of subjects has several benefits, pursuing a certain specialised subjects would be more practical in modern days.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that specializing students at a young age brings great benefits to their future, though it may cause some serious consequences in return. Concentrating on a field of study helps people master their majors,
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premise for them to pass into a good university, later, an awarding job in a famous company. As a result
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