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Dissemination of information around world are effectively carry out through mass media. This essay will juxtapose the merit and demrit of some communication media namely radio, television and film. In my own opinion, I believe that radio is the best at getting information to general public.

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Dear Monica
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 I hope
this
 letter finds you in good health. I wanted to thank you for an amazing week in Australia, I truly enjoyed its scenic beauty and of course, your hospitality
that is
second
 to none.
However
, unfortunately while I was in a hurry packing, the day before my flight, I forgot my wallet in your home, and I think I left it by the night lamp in the guest room. I was devastated when I could not locate it in my handbag after arrival
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 but I was relieved when I remembered that I must have misplaced it in your house. My trusted work colleague
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 Sandra Bolon
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 is on a business trip in Australia and she will be returning to here, Dubai
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 in the coming Thursday; I would appreciate if you could hand my wallet to her to return it to me. I have already arranged with Sandra to pick it up from your house on her way to the airport, I hope you don’t mind. I am sorry for being a complete nuisance and inconvenience, I promise to make it up to you
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 Christmas, when we meet. Love Betty
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