Many believe that doing a part-time job can be beneficial to children and help them develop into better adults. Why is this? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

A commonly held belief

that

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part-time

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a part-time

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job

for underage children is not necessary and makes them not focus well on their studies.

However

, some of them

is

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are

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joining the

part time

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part-time

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job

and claimed that it is beneficial for their personal development.

This

essay will

be proving

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prove

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the

benefit

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benefits

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of the part-time

job

,

as well as

facing the

real-world

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real world

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and

socialize

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socialising

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with

professional

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professionals

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. A commonly held belief is that what we learn at school is completely different in the real

works

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world

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,

therefore

, some

of

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the

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apply

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parents ask their children to take a temporary

job

during school break.

For instance

, adults ask their kids to be a waiter

or

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apply

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waitresses, or even

as

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a barista at a cafe or restaurant, rather than doing nothing at home. By joining

this

, they will learn

to

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about

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a specific work they

interested

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are interested

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to

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in

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and be more

open minded

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. Other benefits of doing seasonal work

is

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are

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to

be socialize

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socialize

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with professional people, which

is to improve

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improves

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their social skills,

manners

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and manners

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and to

grows

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grow

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faster than their usual age does. Specifically, youngsters usually tend to be shy and insecure,

therefore

by

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apply

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joining

the

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a

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temporary

job

, may boost their confidence, maturity and independence level,

such

as

get

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getting

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to know

customer

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customers

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who ordered the

foods

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food

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and drinks.

To sum up

, the benefits of

work

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working

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a casual

job

during

holiday

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a holiday

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outweigh the drawbacks.

Therefore

,

it is clear that

youngster who took a casual

job

will develop better at their age.