The diagrams below show the stages in the erosion of a headland.

The diagrams below show the stages in the

erosion of a headland.
The diagram illustrates the erosion
process
of bluffs.
Overall
, the
process
involves several phases that
initiates
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with soft areas of cliffs and
culminates
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in promontory destruction by sea waves and
that is
precise
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phenomenon entitled
as
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«erosion». The action commences when seawater, apparently at high tide, seeps
to
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the
weakness
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spot of the rock,
for
instance
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this
site may be a cave, which gives a possibility for water inflow.
This
process
merely seemed to be
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, but intrinsically there are quite serious consequences for the rocky formations. Over
the
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time the cave that has been subjected to an erosion phenomenon is supposed to be a naturally created arch. The fact is there are plenty of those arches which have become worldwide known locations (
such
as Durdle Door or Dorset) and are
famous
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attraction
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for tourists.
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this
original act is not completed at the stage mentioned above.
Firstly
, when an arch has already
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a roof is exposed to a breakdown,
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would lead to
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of
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heap only.
Secondly
,
this
pile is not available to contradict
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water waves and tides,
as a
result
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the ledge of
cape
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will be damaged and an outcrop will soon almost disappear, leaving just stumps and stacks in water. It is impressive that nature can destroy and at the same time create new startling views. By a comparison between the beginning of
erosion
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process
and the
last
stage of
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scientists and geologists may make predictions, do forecasts and indeed prevent
from
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some accidents.
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