It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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break after school graduation till applying to university enhances gradually. As far as for

students

it is essential to not hurry with choosing

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, because deliberate and right decisions always lead to great

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. In

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paragraph below, there are some pros and cons that

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need to be discussed. There are some remarkable advantages to

this

trend.

First,

graduated

students

after 10 to 11 years of hard studying, might

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renovate their mind and brain, after

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study by spending valuable

time

on their needs. Because, sometimes

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are not assured

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selecting enjoyable

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and

occupation

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, for the reason that the

students

are not filled with enough

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consciousness, but filled with messy

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information.

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the report

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National University in 2022, many

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year

students

have substituted their first profession

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another, because they

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it

mistakely

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mistakenly

. When local

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asked them why, most of them said that they didn't have

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sufficient

time

to think and make

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decision. Despite the fact that teenagers have all

year

round to recover from academic years, it is likely to break graduated

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discipline and

time

management.

In other words

, as youngsters have plenty of

time

and they are free from school, where

time

management and schedules are very strictly composed, they can just spend their

time

on useless things.

For example

, smoking, playing

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and other sedentary activities.

Moreover

, when you are out of discipline, it is complicated to come back to a normal life and restore

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.

To sum up

, I agree that after finishing school, teens should have some

time

to realise their life purposes. We have to always remember that, the right decision always

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smart strategy. As

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has two sides, it

also

has disadvantages. By having

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off, they might eliminate their lifestyle regulation.