Q: Some people say that at all levels of education, from primary school to university, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

It is generally believed that most universities and schools focus on theoretical knowledge rather than practicals from early schooling to graduate programs.I strongly support
this
statement and I will discuss all my points with accurate examples in the impending paragraphs.
To begin
with, it is a fact that many institutions around the world hardly organize real-life experiments as it is quite costly. Because learning through practice demands a lot of material needed to produce a better outcome for students.To illustrate,Medical students need expensive amenities to learn to handle patients in real life.
However
,some hospitals or institutions could not provide it as they consider
this
very costly.
In addition
, most schools mainly target to improve pupils' theoretical knowledge
instead
of improving skills in which they are more talented .Classical subjects
such
as mathematics ,Science, History, Geography and Language are taught only based on textbooks and children are encouraged to mug up theoretical facts without having proper knowledge or idea about a specific subject.
For instance
, In Indian schools, the curriculum is mainly based on theory and exams are based on the same. To sum up,it is true that a majority of educational firms spend more time enhancing learning facts rather than experiments.
Submitted by deepumolvarghese5 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: